i decided to rid of the pants, leggings and socks and instead replace it with more skin. i decided on adding scars couse it felt more honest.

as for the rest:
-a different color/gradient for the dress interior. give it more of a balance and pop.
-cleaner linework
- Scars better illustrated. they currently look like birthmarks to me.
- stars/glitter/lights around/on dress & Skirt
i might also add either a stick or a pocky, with a smug ass grin in the final product. help sell the impression i want to make.